4 Sales Email Templates to Get Better Open Rates
Crafting the perfect sales email doesn't have to take hours — it just takes the right elements.
By Donald Kelly, Founder, The Sales Evangelist
Crafting the perfect sales email doesn't have to take hours — it just takes the right elements.
By Donald Kelly, Founder, The Sales Evangelist
You’ve done your research. You feel like you’ve got a firm grasp on your prospect and their pain points. You sit down to write an email that perfectly outlines how you can help them meet their goals, and you hit “send.” Days go by, and you hear nothing but crickets.
Getting ghosted by prospects can be one of the most disheartening parts of a seller’s job. But it doesn’t have to be that way. Below, we share a vetted sales email template that can help you get responses.
A sales email template is a pre-written message, sent via email, that can be quickly and easily customized for different audiences. A collection of sales email templates — each one designed for a different type of outreach — is the backbone of your sales outreach, giving you an outline of a conversation that you can tweak for each prospect.
Starting every email from a blank page is a tax on your time — and it shows in your results. A good template hands you a proven structure, so what used to take hours takes minutes and your messaging stays consistent no matter who on the team hits send. Just as important, it frees you up to focus on the part that actually earns replies: the personal details that make a prospect feel like you're talking only to them. The goal isn't to sound scripted — it's the opposite. Let the template handle the structure so you can put your energy where it counts.
There are four core components in an effective sales email template. They ensure your emails are balanced, easy to read, and memorable. Let’s break them down:
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Having a sample sales email template to reference is helpful whether you’re just starting out or looking to improve your existing sales email sequence that matches the stages of the sales process. You can update the below examples with your name and any other relevant information:
Subject: Quick question
[First Name],
I’m Donald Kelly, founder of The Sales Evangelist. Many sales leaders I’m working with right now are frustrated because their reps are not building healthy enough pipelines (three to five times their quota). These leaders don’t have enough time to meet, coach, or train each seller personally.
I’m reaching out because we offer a sales cohort program to help sales pros get to five times their pipeline. We do this by helping with their outreach skills, including better emails, phone outreach, and role-playing. We teach them how to use LinkedIn and assist with personalized coaching.
We’ve helped sellers of all sizes — from SMB companies to enterprise organizations like T-Mobile, Opengear, and Soci — double their performance.
Interested in learning more?
or
[First Name],
I’m Donald Kelly, founder of The Sales Evangelist. I offer a sales cohort program to assist busy leaders by helping their B & C players increase their sales pipeline 3-5x through cold outreach.
Is this something you would be open to learning more about?
The first email should always be a personalized note with a subject line indicating why you’re reaching out. You want the prospect to see and recognize your name before you get into conversation and to quickly realize the relevance of interacting with you. If you don’t make a personal connection, your email is likely to be discarded or ignored as a sales pitch.
Subject: RE: Quick question
I wanted to reconnect about our cohort program to help your sellers with building pipelines.
Do you feel your sellers could benefit from it?
or
I wanted to introduce myself formally. I recorded this while walking into my office… [attached video introduction addressing a unique challenge and offering selling tip]. I just wanted to share why I’m passionate about how this could help your sellers achieve five times their pipeline.
The next email in your sequence should focus on the needs of your prospect or a challenge they might be dealing with, like being new to the company or trying to increase a certain activity within the organization.
The second email lets you show your prospect how you can help them and offers a unique tip based on your experience. You can try recording a short video with a personalized message to stand out even more.
Subject: RE: Quick question
Hey, there. Donald again — the sales coach. Here is an example of what one of our clients said about our program.
“Donald’s program is unlike any I’ve participated in, and I’m extremely grateful. My team and I were fortunate enough to have weekly sessions with Donald, and the results have been incredible. After the training, we saw a12% improvement in our closing rate. One month after the training, we achieved 110% of the quota! That hasn’t happened in a very long time. Thank you, Donald!” — Aaron Brown
“We hired The Sales Evangelist to help us with our outbound strategy. We didn’t have a clear system before. After working with the TSE team for three months, we saw a 200% increase in our investment. I highly recommend TSE if you’re looking to increase your outbound sales revenue.” — Jim Henderson
I get that you’re busy. But in just 10 minutes, I’ll show you how I can help your sellers.
Thoughts?
The third email offers your prospect testimonials or a compelling story about how you’ve helped clients with similar challenges. It follows up your tips with a real-life scenario and reinforces how your offer will help your prospect.
Subject: Not a good time?
[First Name],
No hard feelings. Maybe this isn’t the right time, or your team is all set.
If I can help your sellers achieve 5x their pipeline in the future, let me know.
I post a lot about building sales pipelines on LinkedIn if you’re interested: https://www.linkedin.com/in/donaldckelly/
or
[First Name],
Maybe right now isn’t a good time for your sales team to join my training program. If you need help in the future, please feel free to reach out.
P.S. Stay connected with us on LinkedIn !
The fourth and final email is sometimes called “the breakup email.” This part of the sales email template gives the prospect an easy out of communication, and lets them know where they can find you if they want to connect in the future. Even if your prospect isn’t interested in your product or service right now, you might be able to make a connection on LinkedIn and stay in touch there.
This is an important part of the sequence because it signals to your prospects that you’re not here to waste their time or pursue them if they’re not interested. You’ve given them information about your products and services and the benefits to them, but if they’re not interested, it’s time to move on.
There’s no perfect way to build a relationship with a prospect over email because every interaction will be unique. That said, there are guidelines you can use to ensure your communication feels natural and personalized.
A template only works if you use it well. Here are the traps that turn a good framework into an ignored email:
AI takes the busywork out of outreach. It can draft a first version from your template, tailor the copy to a specific prospect, and suggest subject lines worth testing — in seconds, not minutes. The catch: AI gives you a strong starting point, not a send-ready email. Read every draft, add the specifics only you know, and make sure it still sounds like you.
It helps to have that support built into your CRM. Hunter, the outbound sales agent in Sales Cloud, starts with outbound and works toward outcomes — learning how your sellers win and putting that data to work, so your outreach gets sharper the more you sell.
An effective sales email has four core parts: a greeting that uses the prospect's first name, so it reads like a message meant for them; a simple, low-stakes question that starts a conversation instead of pushing for the sale; your contact information — name, links, and how to reach you — ideally in the signature; and a clear call to action that spells out the one next step you want them to take. Keep the body short and conversational, and those four pieces do the rest.
Give them a look at least once a quarter. The fastest signal that it's time is your own numbers: if open or response rates start slipping, refresh your subject lines and opening lines first, since that's what most prospects see. It's also worth updating whenever your product has a new type of buyer, or you notice your reps constantly rewriting the standard copy — that usually means they've found something that works better.
Yes — and they should be. A template is a starting point, not a finished email. Use it for structure, then layer in the specifics: a detail about the prospect's on, a data point that speaks to their situation. That mix of a proven framework and real personalization is what makes a template feel like a one-to-one message rather than a mass send.
Sales email templates are a valuable shortcut that can make your life easier. They provide structure and consistency to your communication and can dramatically reduce the amount of time you spend on message drafting. However, keep personalization in mind: In the end, you want your prospects to feel like they’re getting a tailored, highly relevant message.
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